my intro!

[Mr_Barcode]

Hey guys! Some of you may know that I'm starting a YouTube channel, and my first video is coming out next week. So far I've done everything myself (my banner, profile pic, thumbnail, etc). Yesterday I made my own intro and wanted to ask what you guys thought of it. Thanks!

https://vid.me/e/V6gw

 

[Kellyys]

If you made that yourself, nice job. Its always a good start

 

[PotionOfHealing | ImWindyy]

Being a complete designer, heres my thoughts.

- in 2d intros, make it max 8 seconds. -1
- don't use present made particles, make your own. -1
- be unique -1
- good pose +2
- decent text +1
- decent transition +1

Good luck on designing.

 

[imSader]

It was good for a start but it was way to long, make the intro length max 11-12

 

[Roasty]

Nice job d00d xD