• Our Minecraft servers are offline but we will keep this forum online for any community communication. Site permissions for posting could change at a later date but will remain online.

So you all think my grammar is bad eh?

ThaLichBD

Peacekeeper
Joined
Apr 19, 2015
Messages
1,253
Reaction score
1,130
Hello There Tributes.

Okay a lot of people complain of my grammar and yeah I know is not good, but English isn't my native language and I really do my best...so know I wan't to challenge you guys.

You have to write in SPANISH a 10 WORDS sentence...please don't use google translate don't cheat, because cheating is not cool, I mean at all. so please make sure that your sentence have sense because, if you just type spanish words with out sense then, what's the point? I won't give you any example because, you may take advantage of it.. hahaha I got you this time, so please make sure to type at least 10 Words in your sentence...I'll give you and English Example:

Cool: Hello How Are you? I'm fine today but, I'm leaving.

Not Cool: Hello happy no idea food water bed eat sing dance.

They both have 10 words count them please, I'll count yours :D

Got it? theres not real limit on the number of words you can write in you'r sentence as much as you wan't after that you post your sentence 2 things can happen:

Like: If it's correct written your sentence.

Nothing: Im just gonna tell you, that you are wrong in your sentence and why?

Love you,
TheLichBD
 

MoLoToV

Platinum
Joined
Jun 27, 2012
Messages
3,693
Reaction score
4,572
I don't really see the point of this? What does this have to do with your grammar?
 

Dzbs

Iron
Joined
Sep 26, 2013
Messages
2,297
Reaction score
2,748
I'm just going to paste in my Spanish speech about my passion for playing the piano. Tell me how it is. xD


Hola, me llamo Juan, y mi pasion es tocar el piano. Hace siete anos que toco el piano. Me gusta tocar el piano porque es muy interesante y divertido. De mi maestra, se como tocar el piano. Practicaba muchas veces durante la semana. Conozco muchas canciones classicas y canciones populares. Estuve feliz cuando recibi un piano nuevo. Es de Yamaha, y escucha bueno. El piano se escucha tan bueno como un cantante. Me hizo enamorarme con la musica. Durante muchos anos, yo tocaba el piano en numerosos recitales. Finalmente, el piano es un buen instrumento y me gusta tocar.

Sorry about the accents, I don't know how to put them in on the computer. :c

Kinda went past the 10 words. :p
 

Ceroria

Mockingjay
Joined
Aug 20, 2012
Messages
11,024
Reaction score
13,943
Hola! Yo se un poco espanol porque estudio espanol en la escuela. Me encanta hablar espanol porque es muy interesante. Quiero hablar espanol muy bueno en el futuro e ir al Espana para (experience?) la cultura.

Mistakes were most likely made, and I don't know how to make accent marks or correct punctuation marks ;-;
 

ThaLichBD

Peacekeeper
Joined
Apr 19, 2015
Messages
1,253
Reaction score
1,130
I don't really see the point of this? What does this have to do with your grammar?
...its easy my grammar is bad because english is not my native language and that all critic it so.. I want for you to see how hard it is

Hola! Yo se un poco espanol porque estudio espanol en la escuela. Me encanta hablar espanol porque es muy interesante. Quiero hablar espanol muy bueno en el futuro e ir al Espana para (experience?) la cultura.

Mistakes were most likely made, and I don't know how to make accent marks or correct punctuation marks ;-;
Its fine but you still having some mistares you have 2/10 words wrong that means its good

I'm just going to paste in my Spanish speech about my passion for playing the piano. Tell me how it is. xD


Hola, me llamo Juan, y mi pasion es tocar el piano. Hace siete anos que toco el piano. Me gusta tocar el piano porque es muy interesante y divertido. De mi maestra, se como tocar el piano. Practicaba muchas veces durante la semana. Conozco muchas canciones classicas y canciones populares. Estuve feliz cuando recibi un piano nuevo. Es de Yamaha, y escucha bueno. El piano se escucha tan bueno como un cantante. Me hizo enamorarme con la musica. Durante muchos anos, yo tocaba el piano en numerosos recitales. Finalmente, el piano es un buen instrumento y me gusta tocar.

Sorry about the accents, I don't know how to put them in on the computer. :c

Kinda went past the 10 words. :p
OMFG its Amazing dud nice story btw you impressed me sus 0/10 words incorrect Im gona follow you dud haha
 
Last edited:

Ceroria

Mockingjay
Joined
Aug 20, 2012
Messages
11,024
Reaction score
13,943
Its fine but you still having some mistares you have 2/10 words wrong that means its good
I'll try something more traditional to what we've learned then in class.. hmmm... I'll just make something random up then

Esta noche mi amigos y yo vamos al cine para ver una pelicula. Me encanta el cine porque el popcorn y los refrescos es muy delicioso. Despues el cine quedo en casa.

rip spanish skills - my school doesn't even offer foreign languages until high school ;-;
 

LittleKisses

Quantum
Joined
Mar 31, 2015
Messages
404
Reaction score
1,145
Hey Lich! I think you do an amazing job with your grammar, considering English isn't your primary language. Sadly I have seen alot worse than you, coming from people who's native language is English. Encouragement is what's needed here, not criticism and the only Spanish word I know is Hola :3 so yeah keep doing what your doing, you can only improve <3
 

Trilexium

Peacekeeper
Joined
Apr 14, 2014
Messages
1,127
Reaction score
981
Breaking the rules (!!!) by pasting some random sentence I found in an old speech of mine for Japanese:

こんにちわ、 僕 わ ジェムズ です。すき な 食べ物 わ チョコレート です。 そして、 すき な 飲み物 わ ‎水 です。 どうぞ よろしく。

[Translation; Hello, my name is James. My favourite food is chocolate, and my favourite drink is water. Nice to meet you.]

I don't know Spanish so that's why ;-;
 

Braden

District 13
Joined
Mar 30, 2014
Messages
2,564
Reaction score
2,475
el popcorn y los refrescos es muy delicioso.
*son

Hola LichDB! Me llamo Braden y soy un moderator para MCGamer. Me gusta Espanol porque es muy popular en Norte America y soy de los Estados Unidos. Estoy en Espanol tres y me gusta la clase porque es divertisimo. Como fue?

*Note: I don't have accents or tildes because I'm on my grandma's laptop. I do know where they would go, however.
 

Members online

Forum statistics

Threads
242,193
Messages
2,449,633
Members
523,972
Latest member
Atasci