cmhcraft12 & ImaginaryMan's Entry for the Lobby Contest

[cmhcraft12]

Hey, guys! I've been making a Lobby for... Less than a day now, and I think it's ready. It's not THAT extreme, but Lobbies don't need much!

Here are some pictures:


Here's one of the main Spawn Room:

Here are the Rules:

Here's the first room in our Beginner's Guide!:

After the Guide, there's a Quiz!:

Here's the Main Hallway going into the Main Lobby:

Here's what you first see when you enter into the Main Lobby Room:

Here's an Overview of the Main Lobby Room:

Here's the Player Cage:

The Hall of Deaths....:

Here's the Entrance to the Parkour:

The Entrances to the Different LEVELS of the Parkour:

Here's the Easy Parkour:

Here's the Medium Parkour

Here's the Entrance to the "HARDCORE PARKOUR!!!!"

Here's the Hard Parkour!:

... Nothing special... XD

Here's our #BlameClank Room!:

Here's a little Jungle-House that ImaginaryMan made:

We also have a Team Meetup Room! You know, where you can meetup with your Team-Mates!:

Here's the Download Link: http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?zne82gdmvefkoc0


Please tell me what you think about it. Also, what would you think if this became the new Lobby?

Thanks for looking at this Map!
~cmhcraft12

 

[zukodark]

Not much theme in it... I must admit. Really boring. Looks really like the current one. And the hard parkour are not that hard...

 

[cmhcraft12]

Oh yeah. The Theme is supposed to be Cozy.

 

[Glitchy]

Comments:

Not much theme in it... I must admit. Really boring. Looks really like the current one. And the hard parkour are not that hard...

Although I would agree with "not much theme in it", but I kind of like the park our, it's not supposed to be extremely easy, or extremely difficult, it needs to be doable.

I like the idea of the quiz, it can be really beneficial to the 'newbies'. Maybe make the quiz attached to spawn so every player has to do it? Also in the first room for the quiz, the pit in the ground is quite boring, since you took time to hide that button, maybe add something cool too it (the pit).

For the medium parkour, I don't know if you wanted this but, the tunnel out of it does not lead anywhere, the path to the restart is blocked at the turn. (if that made sense)

Maybe add room to the actual 'Main Lobby' seems a bit cramped.

Suggestions:

1. Parkours may need a second challenge to each of them?
2. Main lobby room - Larger
3. The Pit (where the music blocks are) add something for people to do rather then just be stuck down there
4. Attach quiz room to spawn (so it is the only way out)
5. Medium parkour exit does not lead anywhere (it's blocked)
6. Parkour rooms don't like spider webs

Overall it looks fun, good job, I like it.

 

[cmhcraft12]

Comments:


Although I would agree with "not much theme in it", but I kind of like the park our, it's not supposed to be extremely easy, or extremely difficult, it needs to be doable.

I like the idea of the quiz, it can be really beneficial to the 'newbies'. Maybe make the quiz attached to spawn so every player has to do it? Also in the first room for the quiz, the pit in the ground is quite boring, since you took time to hide that button, maybe add something cool too it (the pit).

For the medium parkour, I don't know if you wanted this but, the tunnel out of it does not lead anywhere, the path to the restart is blocked at the turn. (if that made sense)

Maybe add room to the actual 'Main Lobby' seems a bit cramped.

Suggestions:

1. Parkours may need a second challenge to each of them?
2. Main lobby room - Larger
3. The Pit (where the music blocks are) add something for people to do rather then just be stuck down there
4. Attach quiz room to spawn (so it is the only way out)
5. Medium parkour exit does not lead anywhere (it's blocked)
6. Parkour rooms don't like spider webs

Overall it looks fun, good job, I like it.

Well, then everyone would just see what everyone else does in and cheats.

I do see what you're saying about the Medium Parkour. But, there's actually 1 way that's the exit, and the other way just makes you restart. It's kind of a guessing situation.

I TOLD ImaginaryMan that the Main Lobby was too cramped... But he said that it was almost too big. :I

The Spider webs are there so that time goes by faster. It's a Lobby, ya know. You just stay there for 5 minutes.


Thanks for the feedback!

 

[cmhcraft12]

We are making some changes, so I am taking down the download Link until we're done with the changes. It shouldn't take too long.

 

[Vaangel]

This is looking very boring and the parkour rooms looks too plain with the non detailed walls. You need to add much more detail to this.

Other than that, good work.

 

[cmhcraft12]

This is looking very boring and the parkour rooms looks too plain with the non detailed walls. You need to add much more detail to this.

Other than that, good work.

What should the wall have detail in? I mean, it's a wall...

Thanks for the feedback!

 

[cmhcraft12]

Ok. So far we're doing good on the update. We're making the main lobby bigger, adding a jungle-gym, and we're adding a special surprise!

 

[zukodark]

Comments:


Although I would agree with "not much theme in it", but I kind of like the park our, it's not supposed to be extremely easy, or extremely difficult, it needs to be doable.

I like the idea of the quiz, it can be really beneficial to the 'newbies'. Maybe make the quiz attached to spawn so every player has to do it? Also in the first room for the quiz, the pit in the ground is quite boring, since you took time to hide that button, maybe add something cool too it (the pit).

For the medium parkour, I don't know if you wanted this but, the tunnel out of it does not lead anywhere, the path to the restart is blocked at the turn. (if that made sense)

Maybe add room to the actual 'Main Lobby' seems a bit cramped.

Suggestions:

1. Parkours may need a second challenge to each of them?
2. Main lobby room - Larger
3. The Pit (where the music blocks are) add something for people to do rather then just be stuck down there
4. Attach quiz room to spawn (so it is the only way out)
5. Medium parkour exit does not lead anywhere (it's blocked)
6. Parkour rooms don't like spider webs

Overall it looks fun, good job, I like it.

So the "Hard" parkour should not be hard? The easy parkour is really easy, so it makes sense that the "Hard" parkour should be difficult. Remember people wanna use time to finally win the hardes parkour. If it is hard, but you win the 2nd time you are in lobby it is not funny anymore. Make the parkour bigger, and every of them difficuller and difficuller.

 

[TheUnchainedArtist]

The Spider webs are there so that time goes by faster. It's a Lobby, ya know. You just stay there for 5 minutes.

Wait, what?

 

[cmhcraft12]

So the "Hard" parkour should not be hard? The easy parkour is really easy, so it makes sense that the "Hard" parkour should be difficult. Remember people wanna use time to finally win the hardes parkour. If it is hard, but you win the 2nd time you are in lobby it is not funny anymore. Make the parkour bigger, and every of them difficuller and difficuller.

Difficuller?