Lost Tribe (repost) 50% finished! please tell me what you think!

[Danjaboy7]

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so here are a few pics of the map. . there are many other structures to the map. it is 200 radius i think and has about 40 tier 2s. please tell me what you think and whether you like it or not!! also i will add much more detail when im done with the structures!

 

[Danjaboy7]

it has about 40 teir 2s and 200 teir 1s is this good?

 

[Azorces]

This map feels very 50% to me for the following reasons

• Use custom trees not regular jungle trees
• I don't like the lava coming out of the temple it kinda makes it pointless
• The map seems to be default terrain which is a nono
• The buildings you have worked on need to be re detailed
• The only thing in this map that I kinda like is the corn so everything else needs to look more real/organic
• I'm sorry to break it to you but the map as it is right now isn't up to par with mcsg standards ATM, but if you work on those things I bet your map will look more appealing. Good luck and farewell

 

[TSnipers]

i like your texture pack

 

[SonicSplit]

It is sort of meh to me. There are some elements I like and others I do not like :/ However it doesn't seem bad but not exactly "MCSG quality" builds. Maybe touch up on some of the builds and add more terraforming/buildings and then it may be excepted.

 

[Danjaboy7]

thanks all who gave a detailed opinion! I am really appreciative of the honesty! So i will completely redo the tree which is what alot of people are saying (not just on this thread)! also are there any suggestions of trees that i should replace with the old ones??

 

[SonicSplit]

Maybe a little less thick trees would be good

 

[Danjaboy7]

yeah just so there is more space for pvp

 

[Electrix]

It has the feel of SG3, and that's because there is nothing but a spawn and very sporadic buildings.

My feedback:
Pros:

• The spawn looks really awesome
• Most of your builds have a more unique and open design, one that I can see as good for PvP.
• The detail on the buildings is pretty good.
• You put water where players are going to see it, but not have to cross it. That's the way to go.

Cons:

• Give people a reason to explore the map further than 100 blocks.
• The void near spawn does not fit in with the map.
• The map only has 2 "hot spots" other than corn, and they are practically the only buildings in the whole dome.
  
• Lower the size of the dome. It's obvious that you don't need that room.

 

[Danjaboy7]

thanks so much for the detailed feedback i really appreciate it and i should mention that the pics are going to be outdated because i am redoing the whole trees apart from the ones near the corn (the ones with bridges from tree to tree)

there is a pic with the tall trees just to show you what trees im thinking of using but much more trees. XD

 

[Danjaboy7]

Just a map of the map (wait what?!?!?) showing the main structures (without trees exept middle)

 

[Danjaboy7]

any ideas for some structures? so far i have the corn, the special trees in the middle then i have parkour within the ravines, a farm house 2 witches houses, a crop storage, a hallow fallen tree, a lake with a boat and two tree houses on each side with a bridge over the lake, a temple and small village. I am going to do a tree parkour thing aswell!